Do you understand me?". White picket fence and all. ", "How old are you?" He turned his wrist slightly and glanced down at his watch. WHAT RIGHT?!" Photograph something besides a top-secret nuclear submarine for once.". “No matter,” the tall man said. the kid stammered, crossing and uncrossing his legs. I mean, you already have it all, a solid job at the Cargo Docks, the house with the fence and the green lawn, a dog, a family.". (Trust me, they DID believe what the police officer told them! The bones in his back crackled and popped as he twisted around. Going to bookmark this - thanks! Caulwell took a seat, and folded his arms across his chest, staring at the Interrogator. It was very helpful. Article by Shutterstock. Three years in Siberia. “Now, I imagine you are asking: ‘why should I trust them?’ That is a very good question. Scopri video professionali e filmati stock su Writing Desks disponibili in licenza per uso in campo cinematografico, televisivo, pubblicitario e aziendale. :P. Some interesting stuff about police stations, and yes, I've been in them before .On more than one occasion. Not like out there." I'm not a professional by any means, but I do write a lot, so here's what I think of your story. Dougherty." Didn't they used to play together? Mrs. Beckett will walk up with you to your door and thank you kindly for all the wonderful help you've been. The man leaned in close and whispered, And I’d thought long and hard about that question, but nothing came to mind. Fluorescent lights. Creative. It should be clear, strong, and believable. "Dig deeper, Jack. In one of my books someone has to report a crime, (it's in first person so we won't actually see the suspect getting arrested) so I'll have to keep some of this in mind!Congrats on the award! Wrote them in a few times in my books. And there is specific reasons why I back-date some posts. Would you like another glass?" If traffic hadn't let up when it did I might've succeeded. ", Jacob shifted in his handcuffs, testing them briefly. "What?" Impressive.” The tall man stopped his pacing and took a sip of coffee before continuing. He was definitely ready to talk. He wanted his home, his dog and his bed. Amateur radio operators were set up in vital operations centers all over the country. I wanted to be fingerprinted...but you know, for fun and for research. :). Caulwell waited a long time, and poured himself yet another glass of water, pulling his hair, considering his options. "It's such a great way to get your ideas across in real time, especially in this age of endless technology. He did it for revenge. In quite a few of my books and WIPs, police stations are common settings. It had only been five minutes so far. Five? "So, Simon Caulwell. Have a seat, please." The pressure of silence was starting to get to him. I understand about not wanting to say book because many of my projects end up being a short story or novella. Thank and post the link of the person who nominated you. His watch had run out of battery... how many days ago? She laid there for one month before she died of starvation and in all that time you want to know what the one thing she could feel was?” I shook my head in fear as tears began to spill down my face. I can live in peace now. The thin man looked at the bound man. "Look at the badge. They sat quiet for only about half a minute before Caulwell broke the ice. I WANTED HIM TO TURN IT OFF! What those men did to your family was a terrible thing. Jonas had been picked up in a black-bag operation, and these people had gained access to his phone and computer. Then he showed his face, his sunken skin and hollow eyes. But the BEST police station story is when I dragged my two sons there to have an officer talk to them. The officer then took a sip. Tell them. places in a police station you can write about. I look forwar to that one, Chrys! The last sentence was my favorite, as it should be. Colberg continued, but the smile never left his perfect face. ", Subject DD4123RT nodded, "William Dunthrod, Max Gillington, Bess Wembletown...". I'm sure you know your own wifes name?". I know you haven't enjoyed you're time here, so we hope to leave you with some good memories. Harmed? I've never been in a police station. "And then next Tuesday Susan Wells will disappear from her job. Give me enough time with somebody and there's nothing I can't do. The one spot on my head that they’d kept hitting was now numb, I could feel the patch of skin that felt frozen compared to the rest of my head. I have been in a poice station, when my youngest son was injured playing football.Most interesting to read and informative to those who have never been "Inside".Yvonne. :-)VR Barkowski, Haha! Good description should make a scene vivid to the reader. ;) I think the jail in a police station is normally referred to as a holding cell, where prisoners are only held until transferred to a larger jail (or until they sleep it off). Your back up plan to fuck off to Thailand and start over? "You were fucking her. He had a huge grin on his face now, revealing his long canines. The bound man stared, expressionless. They didn't believe ME when I told them how dangerous throwing stars are. FREE. situations they need to respond to. Colberg reached forward, his fingers coming closer and closer to the man's eyes. Great post! Thank you :). You're very welcome, Jeffery. Thank you for sharing. I've heard that cops actually hate those shows because they aren't accurate or real. Padded walls. This interrogator was the only human contact he had since being here and this freak, this sadist wouldn't even engage. Now if only you'd get less tickets. His seven year old daughter had been killed in a car accident. She'll tell you that we'll let you know if we need you again. I've never been in one either, so a lot of research was needed for this and my stories. The interrogator pulled several papers from his coat pocket. The interrogator motioned towards the metal chair on the other side of the table. It sent chills down Ben's back. ;), Excellent information, particularly since readers of police procedurals tend to be very picky about details. Then he turned to me and began to talk, “Remember my wife? *Some stations in smaller areas may not have all of this and may need to rely on bigger stations elsewhere for aid. asked Jonas. Jemnia, you remember her, the short girl with the red hair and the... you know," The interrogator waved his hands around, but the visual double entente went over Nazvidson's head, "she went away crying when you wouldn't talk to her. At the center of the room, bolted to the floor, there was an old metal chair. He stared back into the tormentor's eyes, waiting for the other man to blink, to react, something. officers/detectives on the other side who watch the interrogation and the Very helpful. :). “Here’s the thing, Mr. Conrad. They shook hands, and Caulwell nervously smiled back. lol. We've got pictures. http://visual.merriam-webster.com/society/safety/crime-prevention/police-station.php#locker-room32072, What's Your Writer's Bane? ", "Very well. His blood pressure was rising. Oh gosh, sadly, yes inside of a police station for incidents I won't get into, they can be just a bit intimidating.betty. I hope everything worked out fine in the end. The interrogator took a phone out of his pocket and handed it to Caulwell, and gave a thumbs up towards the reflective mirror. It's gone. The room was simple. He pressed a button on the control panel which activated the speakers in the room, allowing for Caulwell to hear him. I'm Commander Wolfe, and I'm not going to hurt you.". And on the chair was a man. If you are really lucky she might even give you her personal contact and a quick kiss before she leaves you alone out there. If you don't, well, we'll see what happens.". "You know, all you need to do is answer our question. were civilians wait to speak to police officers, like hospital waiting rooms. :). Thanks, Alex!You little speed demon. He's chinese, and he cooperates with the fuckin' colombians. Some aspects of the descriptions will remain the same, this is done to keep the general structure the same, while still randomizing the important details. (Quite an experience!) He was so nervous he drank the whole thing in about thirty seconds, but I made him wait two hours, handcuffed to the steel table, before I even went back into the drab interrogation room. This is where dispatchers work with computers and radio They were blank, but this dumb prick didn't know that. Six? You have to know that I do what I do to destroy crooks. He was trying to get answers from Slash, who was sitting in a chair across from where he was pacing. Just a lot of research. 6. Such a sweet little thing. Bonus points if you can this without even needing to threaten violence. Sweat beaded. At least, what’s left of it.” The tall man put down his cup of coffee on the table before he spoke again. “No. I've peeked in a few really small ones, though. Pffft, poof. He flipped through them slowly for the benefit of the handcuffed agent. Thanks for thinking of me, but I received it not that long ago, so I'm gonna pass this time around. By using our Services or clicking I agree, you agree to our use of cookies. To be fingerprinted for an FBI background check before deploying to the G-8 with Georgia Emergency Management. ", "Nothing, huh? Well, she was that pretty lady who’s neck you snapped after she caught you rummaging through our safe. The second puff let it land so that it was actually touching Nazvidson's eye. Days? “So it’s a simple trade. We've done everything we can to keep you safe and comfortable here. April 14th. He left the room and I recognized the sound. "It's nice to finally meet you, Mr. Barrett. *Copyright Protected. I watched him shift uncomfortably in the folding chair through the one-way mirror. »A.Decide on the interrogator’s stance. "Do you know why you're here?" Book Prompts Daily Writing Prompts Book Writing Tips Dialogue Prompts Creative Writing Prompts Cool Writing Writing Help Writing Ideas Fantasy Writing Prompts. The back story was very well described, and your writing style is nearly impeccable. One of them in is a cave in Afghanistan. "You look like you need it. That is an interesting fear and would make a great story...you're great at murder-mysteries...maybe you can turn it into one. The car will leave and you'll be back in your own house. It was hard to come up with five thing. "I plead the fifth." Time swirled in front of him. You're the second person to mention that had to go to one to be fingerprinted for something. Tied up and gagged, in an unfamiliar place, the terror plainly evident on their faces. In these cases, the subject comes between the helping verb and the main French Revolution Dissertation. I’ll insinuate all kinds of horrible things. I don't give a fuck if you go to jail or not. "It's a pity you know," Colberg rolled his shoulders, causing a great pop that startled Nazvidson, who jumped up straight and looked around wildly. Haha! / Guest Post by Sandra Cox / Gwen Slade Bounty Hunter. I wouldn't want to provoke you any discomfort while you're my guest. They removed the bag from Jonas's head a few minutes after handcuffing him to the cold steel of the chair. "Ah, you're finally here, Caulwell. Yes, we made our way into all of those things. And Ellie was absolutely adorable in the school play last year. It had been two hours since I sat him down with a glass and a pitcher of water. ", "I'll keep that in mind. Typically It’s amazing what one can do with a ballpoint pen and a blowtorch. "My family and I..." but Nazvidson's voice cracked from disuse. The lights were stark and bright against the whitewashed walls. How to Write Murder Mysteries. Four? ", "N-No...we were in love!" He said she had a delightful tan.". Caulwell had began to sweat. ", "Understandable, considering you've been rather busy dipping your noodle in expensive prostitutes. You'll get a ticket to the show, no, we'll give you several tickets to box set. I smiled. 1. Plotting out the novel first can help you organize your thoughts so you won't feel so overwhelmed. Tehe....the part about me loving heights was a lie...all of those were lies. ", "It costs me nothing to be polite. "And I'm not saying a word until then, either. I apologize for this inconvenience. Enjoy it, because... well you know how it is out there.". Oh, you know, you should really learn about 'Incognito mode.' fluid (semen, saliva, blood). That is weird that you don't get an email when I comment. Stephan swallowed hard. your own Pins on Pinterest But, what if he didn't? "I told you I don't want anything," Caulwell said. :D. I've never been in a police station. He leaned back in his chair and pushed a white handkerchief towards Ben. Colberg pushed back his chair and stood up. And I do so relish the chance to cross wits with the infamous Agent Jacob Barrett. The tall man’s voice dropped to a near-whisper. “For one month, the only thing my wife could hear or feel, was water dripping onto the same spot of her head for one month, that’s all she had, and although paralyzed, that water drove her to insanity, she’d died cold, alone, starved, and insane... and that’s how I intend to leave you if you don’t answer my questions!”. Article by Elora Browning. Let me know if you can't find them. You killed her without a seconds thought... at least that’s what you thought. "How is your daughter, by the way? ", "I thought the Government Antitrust Law of 2025 blocked you from doing that. Hi Chrys, Congrats on the blog award :) This post is great because I may need to reference how a police station operates in my next project (I don't like to say book because I'm not sure where this is going). But right now, those murderers are still running free. "Mr. That's a good thing, right? "Well," the man lay his hand on the cold metal table that separated them, "it doesn't look like we've been getting much of anywhere. "No! His hands were behind his back, he was looking Jack in the eyes. What does it matter if I started it? The door opened from the outside and the same two men came in again. Martel said, yanking a walkie-talkie from his pocket. Jack stood up, knocking the chair backwards as he did so. I'm sorry I forgot on Friday. I want you to suffer for being a stinky pile of shit.". Most have one-way windows/mirrors with police BOO! After some reflection, I decided that I would right about a more intriguing kind of artist. What IS important, however, is your connection with the Conservative Republic Movement. Fantastic! "Do you? "You needn't worry Mr. Nazvidson, you are completely safe from harm here. Good for you!Thank you, Susan. Crisp blue shirt. Shouting was the way we communicated when I was a kid, for chrissakes. The bound man stared straight ahead, his expression still blank. In comes rolling in the worst thing possible, the vacuum. ", "The CIA says so, and I believe them. :PThat story about your son's is great. I... ...All I could hear was the menacing, hollowing sounds of the drops of water. I knew full well what I did and I was ashamed of it, but I couldn't tell him. ", "The CRM are trying to get the materials for a mustard gas bomb. I have been in a police station. Ronald working on his passing - he had always struggled with that, but his parents were still proud of him. I use a sheriff's station in one of my wips. Stubble covered his face. Pince's eyebrow spiked on his forehead, but his lips stayed shut. He couldn't. Hm. *Crime labs can do more than what I listed here. I've never actually been in a police station before. With two cop brothers, and a job where I worked with police to permit events for a city on the West Coast, I had no choice. I can’t say for sure whether or not you felt guilty when you dumped her in that ditch, but if you didn’t, you should now because now you know that when you left her there to rot.. she wasn’t dead. :). But, but, he was so, so, so thirsty. ", "He's a bit boring, but he's got a wife, Katherine Anderson, and two beautiful children, Ellie and Ronald. I chatted with an officer on the phone, and he said he'd be happy to set them straight. ", "You bet your ass. Caulwell looked at the reflective glass at the end of the room, as if to search for help by the people watching on the other side. Congrats on the award. Another photo of her getting the newspaper in the morning. And the beast that gave me it is dead. I. Did you notice that I nominated you for the Creative Blogger award? But I promise you, you won't get away with this. "Unless...," the interrogator finally said. The officer continued. The interrogator chuckled quietly. ", "We don't work for the government, Jonas.". :DAnd that is a very good thing. You've come to the right place! :) You're welcome for this bit of information and for the much-deserved nomination. My goals one of these days is to skydive... Oh my! You should keep writing, my friend. ", "Right, just ask me nicely to tell you about a mission that's classified Triple-Plus-Ultra-Top-Secret. I wonder if someone wanted to visit for research would they be allowed? "I have no idea who that is. It was brand new before they picked him up at his house after the fire. He's a very bland sort of fellow, doesn't have any hobbies to speak of, never goes out on the town. At least you've never been arrested. I wasn't sure if you received it or not. I'm glad you'll be able to use this post, Julie. Our local Sheriff's department used to always give a tour to students in high school. There have been some many people who have been excited to talk with you, and you've brushed us all off. "I want witness protection. A records/property room is a secure storage area where What right do you have to keep me from living a peaceful life? When the door closed, the interrogator finally spoke. 2. He waved toward where Nazvidson's fellow revolutionaries fought the State. His eyes were bloodshot and weary. "Do you know what you did!" I might even hurt you. The closest I've ever spent to spending any reasonable amount of time in a police station is I once had breakfast in a Dunkin' Donuts shop for breakfast and a few cops came in to get donuts and were discussing a case.PS - I did post those Anne journal entries. But if for some reason you end up in this room again, I want to make certain we can trust each other. She enjoys flirting with him, too.I haven't written any crime so I have to research a little on tips for that.I didn't realize the crime lab was right at the station. Congrats on the award, I liked the 5 lies you listed. Ronald's on the school's soccer team, he's a freshman, but he's got a bright future ahead of him. Yes, they can be called a jail cell or a holding cell. "I don't know what you're talking about. cried Jonas. It wasn't me! You are funny! She's introducing us to one of her heroines of steel...Gwen Slade, who is a bounty hunter. See more ideas about room, interview rooms, photo prompts. cataloging, and storing them. 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